sweetdreamer33: The Girl He Never Noticed



Piness Be inspired in their story Laugh Cry Giggle and Feel in Love with them I found this fanfic or story or unpublished book or whatever ou call it by accident on Wattpad I haven t read fanfictions in forever and I saw this fanficunpublished book was pretty popular so I thought why notHonestly I found the story very intriguing Every chapter made me curious and it was indeed a page turner But since I m used to read published books that have been through lots of editing process reading a fanficunpublished book with HORRIBLE GRAMMAR really drives me insaneIt s so clear that English is not the author s first language It seems like she doesn t even know the difference between Thank God and Thanks God There were also some foreign languages in this story like French and German And according to the comments from the native speakers the grammars of those languages are also wrong LOL google translate muchSeriously I would have rated this 4 45 Stars if it s written in good English And the writing style I don t like it when the author s mentioning something she keeps putting etc in the end of the sentence And it happens in than 1 sentence consecutively I know my grammar isn t that good either but come on You re an author And I heard this fanfic will be published into book too soon I just hope the published book won t be this horribleThe characters were okay Although most of the time Eros the hero was so annoying but in the end he finally grew up Jade was a very hardworking girl I liked her even though sometimes she seems so vulnerableAside from the grammar I found this story was really interesting Just when I thought the plot would get worse the author surprised me by making it better in the next chapter If Jahanara you have a strong heart andou don t mind with lots of grammatical errors Principles of Thermal Ecology you should definitely read this But ifou are a grammar nazi that Dreaming of the Void your heart is too fragile to handle horrible grammarou d better wait until the book is published LOL Towards the end I felt like all the plot details and drama was forced and unnecessary and sometimes the characters acted stu So bad it makes me cringeI wish I could un read this book But the sad part is I don t like jumping to conclusions about a story from the very beginning so I give it the benefit of doubt by reading till the end And god was this terrible Not only the muddled up plotting there was no legitimate storyline but the characters were like cardboard cutouts no depth whatsoeverTo make matters worse the grammar Obviously English isn t the author s forte but if Rebirth Volume 3 you re writing a fucking book wouldn tou at least have a basic knowledge of the language I don t even know how it has so many reads and votes because I have read some really good books on this site which deserve so much attention but then books like these sideline them due the presence of an overwhelming majority of teenaged girls with wild fantasies of a brooding CEO who has Greek God looks Fuck this shit out of here. Tributes he’s also a ruthless cold and heartless tyrant his colleagues’ and enemies’ worst nightmare He never smiles never says “please” and never apologizes for his mistakes Can the woman with the black wig and dark rimmed eyeglasses change him Or will he end up changing her inste.

sweetdreamer33 ¾ 7 REVIEW

Heir love for each other Will the past come stalking to themA story of anticipation mixed with good proportions of romance making the reader wanting of Jade and Eros Title of the storyThe Girl He Never Noticed otherwise TGHNNStars 5 beautiful full of feelings starsGeneral Reaction for this storyNow some things about this story I absolutely loved everything about this story From the start to the finish It also had some uotes too at the start of each chapter which i loved almost all of them And the plot was intriguing and simple and mostly worth reading All in allyou could see that the writer of this story had spent a lot of time and effort to make it The charactersMr Eros Petrakis ou have been listed as one of my dream men This man is so damn perfect And Jade is a very good personloyal to her familyok she had made mistakes but she tried to move on until she met HIM and her world went almost upside down and not only her worldShe is a really good hearted person after what she had been throughBy the way not forget to mention that i also liked the dual pov s in this story You know Jade s then Ero s Ero s then Jade s We could see the facts from different perceptions And that was pretty goodTo sum upi loved that story And it was my first Wattpad story I have high expectations now for the other stories i will read on this site crossing my fingers Ah wellI hope one day the writer will make a second story about ErosJade and their cute son Zion 35 Stars FIRST OF ALL WHAT I WROTE HERE WAS MY OPINION EVERYBODY HAS THEIR OWN OPINIONS AND THOUGHTS AND THAT S PERFECTLY OKAY SO STFU AND STOP COMPLAINING MY REVIEW Read this for free on Wattpad The blurb from Wattpad Meet Jade The girl who wore a black wig black rimmed big eyeglasses and braces She was dressed in her worn out knitted coat and shapeless vintage clothes Everyone thought that she was a weirdo a nerd or a girl resurrected from the past She was used to be the laughing stock of everyone But who was really Jade Collins Why did she hide her real outer beauty What happened when her boss the great Eros Petrakis finally noticed her Could she tame the beast inside him Meet Eros The man who had everything in life Devilishly handsome very powerful brilliant extremely rich and had a body that women loved to worship But despite all that positive attributes he was also very ruthless tyrant cold and heartless He was his colleagues and enemies worst nightmare They thought his name was another four letter word of EVIL He never smiled never said please and never apologized for his mistakes His employees feared him most He fired them in just a snap of his fingers What made him finally noticed Jade How would he react when he sees the beautiful woman behind the big black wig and dark rimmed eyeglasses Enjoy reading the story of Eros and Jade in THE GIRL HE NEVER NOTICED Join them in their journey in facing their trials in life overcoming the shadows of their pasts and finally finding love and hap. Her physical appearance And what happens when her boss the great Eros Petrakis finally notices her Can she tame the beast inside himMeet ErosHe’s the man who has everything in life devilishly handsome powerful brilliant extremely rich and with a body to die for Despite all his positive at.

It s 35 Book is really really good but I think the ending is rushed in 3 4 chapters she wrote than in whole book And Zyon What the heck but all in all a very good plot and I would definitely read a part two I need to know what happens with all of them 15 Stars Jade and Eros One couple I love to death It is a beautiful love story of two people who come from two different ends It is one of my favourite books on Wattpad I really loved the part where he realises that Jade is indeed Ginger And Zion that was so very unexpected and shocking Eros s reaction to Zion was really cute I am so glad that she has decided to continue the book about their life after marriage A must read WHAT I THINK ABOUT THE BOOK IT SUCKS DICKthis book was so good at first i read this book in 2014 and i thought it was friggin amazing but th I was recently exposed to an English system and it was not my first language after a while i thought id go back and revisit the book a I finished the book a while ago and I m here to say a couple of thingsThe book was entertaining I can t say no to that I had some issues though with it that justifies my rating 1There was some character development I can t disagree but I think it could be written better not a big issue for me and sometimes the characters were acting childish not a real big issue for me2The dramaOh God the DRAMA The book was nice and refreshing and after a certain point view spoilerThe one night stand and the pregnancy as well as the adoption There is NOTHING nothing in the book that prepares ou for this it s so light that The Strength of a Gamma (Pack Discipline you think Here we are fucking drama free and then it slapsou across the face with that crap It makes ou believe it s a nice love story and close the end all this UNnecessary DRAMA that wasn t well written as well in our FACE No Just no hide spoiler To all those romantic softies out there this one is a must read story It made me cry smile and blush all along the entire storyJade a beautiful girl who hid behind large rimmed glasses and loose fitted clothes had a past known only to her sister and mother which made her get branded as a nerd and weirdo Who really was she What is the reason behind her transition from a carefree pretty girl to a nerdy oneEros extremely handsome rich and powerful business man who is hard hearted unmoving ruthless person His employees feared him and his enemies had ualms to cross him Everything about him screamed Evil The Girl He Never Noticed sweetdreamer33Eros employer of Jade saw through her What made him look through her disguises at her pretty face and heart Eros had never felt something like this in his life before He wanted to keep her with him so he gave her the most unexpected job of making coffee for him in his house whenever he reuired Jade made him change his rude attitude and struggled not to fall for his handsome face Being new to this feeling he did not know how to handle himself and went on to hurt her in the processWill they express Meet JadeShe’s the girl who wears a black wig big black rimmed eyeglasses braces and dull old fashioned clothes Everyone thinks she’s a weirdo or a girl resurrected from the past She’s used to being the laughingstock of everyoneBut who is the real Jade Collins Why does she need to hide.

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